this is my final finished article. i think everything works really well. the use of colours is good; with the 2 different colours for the questions and the answers. also taking parts out and putting them in speech marks was a good idea.
on a whole i think the article looks really interesting and would definately catch the readers attention.
On looking back at your whole blog Linzie, i noticed that all your preliminary production work is not there. i'm thinking about your contents page mock up in particular. Please post that on ASAP as the moderators expect to see it and will deduct marks if it isn't there, even if we both know you have done it.
ReplyDeleteWell done for all of your hard work on this project Linzie. Your finished blog looks well organised and clearly records all stages in your production. congratulations for getting all of this completed on time, however, it was difficult to monitor your work as you did so much out of school and uploaded the majority of your work very close to the deadline. Improving this aspect of your work would have given me and your target audience more chance to give you useful feedback. You have done some proficent analysis into exisitng music magazines. Comments could be a bit more analytical and use more media terminology though. there is excellent evidence of sketches and drafts of your work. Overall, use of ICT has been very good.
ReplyDeleteYou gave a helpful presentation Linzie, evaluating your production work. you communicated clearly and used ICT proficiently. It would have helped if you had shown off your skills more with a bit more visual interest or interactivity on your slides. You showed proficient understanding of the forms and conventions used in your work and evaluated your work in light of audience feedback. You covered all of the 'seven points' you were expected to. Well done
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